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Dark Anime / Fan Fiction / A queen's battle, a lost soul Moderat de Bloody_Angel, Mariko21, Poison Ruby, Pungasha, ancutza_vampiroaica
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DeeDee
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Am inceput sa scriu o poveste cu vampiri. Cum vi se pare?


A Queen’s battle, a lost soul

Chapter 1

    The night is black and the wind blows furiously through the ruins of the old altar, making terrifying noises. Twelve black shadows landed on the big stones.
   “Finally…free!” one of them says. “After five hundred years, we are free to live…”
   “We have to find the last member” another one said.
   “She will restore our power…”
   “She is the chosen one…”
   “She will lead us to victory…”
   “We shall bathe in human blood…”
   “We will destroy them for what they did to us…”
   “The girl completes our sacred circle…”
   “But she was killed by that priest! How can we…”
   “She was the most powerful creature of the night! She must have found a way to reincarnate herself…otherwise we wouldn’t be free…”
   “Our queen is alive and we, her humble servants, must find her”
   “Creatures of the night, our time has come. The humans are weaker and weaker every day. They no longer believe in us. Tonight is a full moon. Let’s make it shine! Let’s cover it in the mortals’ blood!”


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"A rose is a beautiful poem..."

...but beauty is not the only thing that matters...
...have fun!...



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KITISHOR
Bloody`s lil sis

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pare interesant inceputul, continu-o k sunt curioasa

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dea91
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interesant, sa mai pui ca sa imi dau seama, pana aici 9

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Dark Crow
Dark Avenger

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draguta, dar nu o faci sa para atat de interesanta pe cat poate fi, folosete mai multa descriere, povestire, detalii despre personaje...

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I am deeper than fear, I am worse than a nightmare, I am more than an obssesion, I am darker than night, behold me and tremble, for I am Dark Crow!

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DeeDee
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Sorry, nu ma prea pricep la descrieri. Dar iata ce mi-a iesit:


Chapter 2


   
The Sacred Circle’s temporary leader (temporary replacement for the Queen) flew over London searching for his prey.
His eyes narrowed, he fought against the currents of air, flying against the wind to feel it whip his face; he could never forgive himself for what he did 500 years before, an foolish act that had led to their destruction – and death of their beloved Queen.

*flashback*

A dark and stormy night; lightings and rain poured washing the stone walls of the castle.
The night creatures’ hiding place, a deserted castle in Transylvania in an inhabited area on top of the mountains was now occupied by the last survivors of a most-feared race. 
Lycar, the Queen’s right hand kneeled in front of her.
   “Your Majesty, two more of our brothers have been destroyed.”
She lowered her head in grief.
   “We must counter attack!” she said loudly after a few moments. “We must end this series of crimes against our race!”
   “I agree, my Queen. They are here. They camped outside of the castle walls”
   “Gather all those who are left”
   “We’ll be thirteen against twenty slayers, fifty villagers and a priest” Lycar said. “We must run!”
   “But how?!” she said standing up suddenly. “We are surrounded!”
   “I know a secret passage…” Lycar started.
   “Do you?”
   “We can escape and organize a surprise attack or something”
   “I trust you, Lycar, with my life. If you think this is the best solution, I accept it. After all, you are my counselor.”
The Queen looked up the window. She wanted to fight, but she couldn’t stand it to see more of her brothers and sisters be destroyed by those blood-thirsty humans. She raised her hand and looked at it. Her power started to leave her, as she hadn’t fed in a long time.
At this rate, a surprise attack or any kind of attack was out of question.
   “Gather the others, Lycar, and tell them about the plan. I hope that your passage really is secret. Otherwise, you’re leading us into a trap”

The vampires followed the Queen through the secret passage. She was leading the way, as always, while everyone else stood behind her. After a while, the tunnel went smaller and smaller, but they moved without complaining or making any noise.
They place was quiet, making them confident.

Suddenly, a scream was heard.
The Queen had been caught.
   “Go back! Quickly!” she yelled at them.
Surprised, the other vampires backed up to fall into a garlic and holly water trap. They quickly turned into bats but were captured and locked inside an iron cage. They were all taken outside.
      Two of the slayers still held the Queen. She turned sad eyes. They had been charmed by her beauty and couldn’t find the power to kill her.
   “So, she is their Queen” the priest said approaching.
   “And you are the so-called messenger of God” she replied in a cold voice. “I suppose you began this hunt”
Some of the slayers began to drool at the sight of the beautiful and mysterious Queen.
   “Weaklings” the priest said raising a cross into his hand. “Can’t you see she’s bewitching you?! Clear your minds!”
   “She’s so beautiful…” one of the slayers whispered. “Are you sure she’s a vampire?”
   “Of course I am! The devil is known to hide behind angelic faces!”
   “All that we do is feed. We do not kill for pleasure” she said. “We never did”
   “Shut up, Devil! I know what you are! Demons! Assassins! Bloody murderers!”
   “And you, humans, what are you? You’ve killed my brothers and sisters until we were reduced to 13. You are a demon more than I am, servant of God!”
The priest slapped her.
She turned her head to face him again, licking the blood falling from her lower lip.
   “I have heard enough. Kill her!” the priest ordered.
But no one could bring to do it. All men seemed to be in a trance.
   “Fine then, I will do it!”
The priest pulled a wooden sword from one of the slayers and thrust it into the left side of her chest.
   “I will be back” she whispered before falling on the ground dead. The priest used his sword to cut her head off and then threw it away.
   “You two” he ordered. “Burn her body. I don’t want any surprises”
No longer in trance, the men did what they were told to do.
   “And what are we going to do with them?” one of the slayers asked.
   “Leave them here. The sun will burn the rest of the vampires” the priest said. “We will stay here until sunrise to make sure they don’t escape”

Two hours later, only a fine dune of cinder could be seen at the bottom of the cage.

*end of flashback*

Lycar spotted his first victim and prepared to attack. He flew straight towards the ground and landed behind the frightened woman.
She didn’t even get to scream.


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"A rose is a beautiful poem..."

...but beauty is not the only thing that matters...
...have fun!...



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KITISHOR
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de-abia astept sa ajungi la chapter 3

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